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Ma fille est le boss final, 我的女兒是滅世大魔王, 灭世女神今年5岁, 내 딸은 최종 보스
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Lee Seojun could only watch as his daughter, the witch Lee Seola, turned into the wicked final boss who destroyed the world and brought upon his death. Though never a good dad, as he loses consciousness, Seojun gets a new quest: “Change the Future.” Upon awakening, he sees a 5-year-old Seola standing before him. Now, Seojun must raise Seola to avoid the misfortunes that originally turned her wicked and become the caring father she never had. The price of failure? Only the end of the world.
Ma fille est le boss final, 我的女兒是滅世大魔王, 灭世女神今年5岁, 내 딸은 최종 보스
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some1 has a 1TB long ass name
lol
Naveen Agarwal
A great Ending achieved 🤗🥳
Bald_Monk
Seems the series goona end soon.
niconeitor
i was wondering the same, i guess he's just a catalyst for Yoo and Seol-ah to do what they must
Diwas
Just wanna ask… Is the MC, Lee Seojoon actually just a side character with no much powers? Useless?
VoidSlime
Too much. Far too much stray. I think weve all got our actual happy ending before the past seol ah came into play. The rest is just worth Wattpads attention now. Ive seen countless of mumbo jumbo random characters joining in
Chemon
Bookmark c141
starts off with a cool premise with an overtone of redemption, a smart guy who makes all the right decisions decisively to rectify all the errors that lead to his previous life's doom. Good 8.4/10 at this point
characters are pretty likeable and pacing is good. Art is light and cute and the vibe is just right.
After a while it slowly loses focus, we spend more time on boring dungeon shit and less time directly dealing with his daughter, which takes away a lot of the fun.
Even further on, it gets more complex and I personally just wanted to go back to the simpler arcs that were more fun. Around this point, MC gravitates towards being more generic, losing all of his clever decisiveness. But it happens so slowly, you don't realise it until you remember how sharp he was right at the start.
anyway at approximately c130 to c140 ,it goes off the wall and they complicate the plot so much and with so many needless characters, I lost interest
7.3/10, probably won't reread.
Chemon
Look that's fine and all…. But they've added so many characters that weaving all of them into this rebirth story has become a mess.
if they kept the characters very streamline this would have been an excellent plot. But right now, it's looking like a shit show because they're spreading the story too thin and trying to involve too many people
Chemon
This is going off the rails… And not in a fun way
VoidSlime
Too many things going all at once. It kind of feels like a wattpad story now honestly. The part where the author decides to keep the old plot but decide to change it in later chapters because they want more twists and extension to the story. It kind of destroys the story and confuses the heck out of people so its not something that get more readers, instead most probably a lot of droppers who are content at the happy ending part where the mc is actually the mc of the story and not some random chapter jumper character
Chemon
Yep that’s exactly it. It’s the reason I dropped this as well.
Chemon
Oh fuck off, this is just getting convoluted now. They're just throwing shit at a wall going something sticks.
Chemon
At least take a limb or even a damn pinky or something as a visual cue.
it's a bit cliche but at least it would make more sense than this.
Give him a constant reminder of the failure every time he looks at his hand.
Chemon
Fucking hell, she's acting like a super bitch.
id be perfectly happy with killing off anyone who meant any kind of harm to my child. Even if they had magic future visions of a terrible event
Chemon
Bítch àss Nígga, you were equally, if not more ruthless to your own daughter you díckhead.
dont try to play the edgy emo 'there is no god' card. This is mainly your fault
Chemon
He already failed spectacularly once.
you put any evil person through literal hell and let them reset and I'm sure they'll change their actions too
i don't think he's a particularly good guy. Honestly OG seol-ah is kind of correct. It's not fair that he can abandon her world and live a happy life while his she is still suffering
Chemon
Good job, but you should have killed him with the arrow, could have jabbed his throat and then the second attacker wouldn't have had a clear run
Chemon
This nigha needs to die fr
Chemon
No but like… I can fix her.
Chemon
To be fair… It actually started with neglect, abuse, kidnapping and torture.
this is just the trigger that officially sparked the end
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Chemon
Wait what.
i love her but it's she retarded?
assuming she knew she was able to fight it, they didn't need to rush
assuming she has a feeling seol-ah was around, they would have all got saved anyway
and lastly, she could have 100% gone with them and returned later. She KNEW that this would trigger her misfortune and chose the bad end anyway.
why?
Chemon
Lol, at least it's satisfying to hear they got instantly punished for killing best girl
Chemon
Fucking Albert?!
why though? Why not make it a bunny, it's more aligned with all the iconography from the start of the series. Or at least something excessively powerful or even a weak looking but overpowered monster…
i love Albert but using him twice is tacky.
i guess he's being used because he's no longer contracted to erszabet but still.
Chemon
Then they canplay with seol-ah together
Chemon
Why would they frame her as his sister?
that would lead to dickheads investigating 'her' family and eventually finding out he's linked to everything
Chemon
Better writing would have been to call back to ALL the things he said when he made her escape the forest alone
I think he said stuff like "don't worry I'm good at running away" or whatever he said. Would have had a bigger emotional impact on the reader since it would have implied that she took every word to heart and engraved it into her being. But nah, she just said the one line.
its a pretty basic story telling technique tbh
Chemon
I know someone who had an accident and after the initial scare, one of the temporary side effects is that he completely lost all of his emotions for a few months. In hindsight, He said some funny things as a result because you couldn't tell if he was joking or not.
But fuck me, he was pretty scary, he literally turned into the terminator. No love, no hate, just a machine with scars
he's better now, doesn't remember any of it though
Chemon
My dawwwgggg.
i know this is too PG to actually have him kill the bastard
… But I wish he did lol
Chemon
I think because she wasn't being her bright,positive self; he wasn't getting them healing vibes
Chemon
Yessir. eszra is best girl and I'll die on that hill.
Chemon
I have no idea.
he was really sharp in the early chapters, now he's acting like a plank. He also is falling into generic MC archetypes
i think the author is writing at a faster pace than they can handle and the writing has gotten a lot weaker
Chemon
Oh yeah I forgot about him.
remember when he caught the MC in the middle of a robbery and then everyone forgot about it and he never became a criminal even though he stole an item from the auction with an 8mllion won bid on it?
yeah that happened
Chemon
That needs a comma
that implies seol-ah is the mommy lol
Chemon
I also nitpick chapters tbh
a nigga needs to vent to release the tension before getting riled up by the next piece of nonsense lol
Chemon
They've really pulled away from the whole father daughter aspect and I didn't sign up for that.
like sure it's always in the background but honestly it should be the main thing.
with the exception of the framing of the story and his new personality, he's basically neglecting her for work again, they're barely doing anything important together, it's just cute stuff then back to boring dungeoneering with uninteresting side characters
Chemon
She's too hot to die here
Chemon
That was a pretty cute gag.
good stuff
Chemon
Nah in this case he's right.
if she was buffing him from the start of the story and it finally paid off it would be good writing
but they added this buff out of nowhere with no real justification barely 2 chapters ago just for this event making it a cheap plot device.
almost as if she knew the plot… And gave him armour for it
Chemon
Agreed 100% this story has recently been making all the wrong moves.
went from unique plot and decent writing to generic plot and trash writing
Chemon
Daeho a real nigga
he knows his people well enough that he can see an imposter from a mile away
Chemon
Unless I missed something that hostage is definitely dead in the back of the trunk of the car that crashed.
i assume the villain survived that 100% chance death fall because of his stats but the hostage was a normal civilian
Chemon
Was that guy still tied up in the trunk of the car that became scrap metal from flying off a cliff?
if so, he deserves it for snitching
Chemon
See… Now how tf did he find this guy
Chemon
What did that mf hostage seriously snitch on the guy warning a target to the knife welding maniac expecting the nutter to let him go free on good behaviour?
not for victim blaming but that guy needs to die
Chemon
The translator is implying he feels like a bad person because his instinct was also to kidnap the daughter as the ideal target BEFORE the character gave his answer
Chemon
That's not really plot armour, just stupid writing.
plot armour will be if he doesn't become a criminal after the guy snitches on him to the authorities.
as if all is forgiven once the arc is over lol
Chemon
This arc had the potential to be really fun but it turned out to be super rétarded.
he attempted the dumbest heist, got caught, got into a fight, got exposed, got the loot stolen from him and attacked the guild guy. Essentially failing on every front.
he's literally a criminal now. He would be hunted by the law once the guy snitches on him
Chemon
To be fair he's a dumbass for other reasons. But he didn't expect to be seen so taking the cape for flight makes sense… At least from his point of view as a inept heist planner
my complaint is that he expected a room full of VIP high rollers to not have anyone capable of seeing/attacking him during a robbery at the main event Infront of everyone.
Chemon
I may have forgotten, it's been a while… She must know about the alternative timeline then? Just because she's a witch? Dunno I'm confused
Chemon
Sorry but that's a bit silly
any reputable organisation has a regulated workflow. In this case, they would have set teams built according to their organisation guidelines. And any guild worth their weight knows a raiding team needs tanks, DPS, range and healing capabilities, in fact any teenage gamer knows that one.
the fact they claim to be a mid size organisation and then perform this amateurishly is terrible writing and poor world building from the author
Chemon
I'm justifying in my mind that she's using magical bullets that use mana as the projectile so it can effectively harm the monsters.
As such the mana dissipates rapidly over distance making it a short distance weapon.
although my memory is a bit foggy , I'm pretty sure that theory may not work because I think she was trying to figure out a way to make her bullets stronger via mana In earlier chapters, implying that it can't be done as of yet.
Chemon
Lol didn't expect that weirdness at the end haha
Chemon
Clearly best girl
Chemon
A bit tacky since it was clearly a rush job to earn that ticket and have it be spent in the same arc.
if the author had a bit more foresight, mc could have earned it earlier so it was actually mysterious for longer
Chemon
God damn, that spike is as wide as her abdomen.
what kind of magic potion does he have to revive her from that?
Chemon
Boy got his ego checked and is salty about it lol
Chemon
Nope sorry, like like a day has passed. I would have dragged him to a river and dropped him in to drown.
maybe not, but I would definitely kill him
Chemon
Kill him.
seriously.
if the situation allowed, I wouldn't even hesitate.
Chemon
White hair snitch mf.
NOW he deserves to die. Can't be running your mouth like that
Chemon
Pretty badass boss entrance
Chemon
G36c? A woman of culture
Chemon
I honestly didn't like that series, I really wanted to enjoy it but there were too many goofy plot points and the dad was really pathetic and naive to the point where my frustration caused me to drop it.
Chemon
I defended the white haired àsshole last chapter on a technicality but I swear, if he takes credit for the raid I'll be the first to take up pitchforks and torches leading the angry mob
Chemon
To be fair, what white hair said was 100% reasonable.
its akin to a suicide mission Without MCs regressor knowledge.
sure it's not heroic to wait it out at the expense of a child, but risking multiple lives through an irresponsible snap decision because of his emotions isn't the quality of a leader. He technically made the right call… Until they walked off without him
Chemon
I can't for the life of me understand why someone wouldn't take care of their children properly. Baffles me how someone could abuse or neglect a child that they chose to bring into the world
Aagaroth
💀💀💀wtf